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Cubomania – a page from my notebook.
Our local writing group met for the first session of the year last night and we talked a little about what the value of this sort of thing is. Does it generate poems? Yes, but they’re off the wall, although if you play around a bit, meanings start to surface that do have resonance. Are the poems likely to have a wide readership? No, because they don’t provide that instant (and broadly accessible) hit that you get from a great line of poetry, for example, ‘the wet socket of a levered stone’ (from ‘Every Creeping Thing’ in Jacob Polley’s Jackself). However, I’d argue that the process of creating a poem using this method is a great way of freeing up the mind, of putting the ego to one side and not having any expectations about the finished product. If you’re strict with yourself, and only use the words in the collage, you’re imposing a set of rules you don’t normally work by. This gives you a sort of confidence (some of my writing group would say it’s misplaced confidence but that’s okay). The process of writing can be full of self doubt. An exercise like this needs you to focus. There’s no time for self doubt or procrastination, not in the initial stages. It’s almost a moving meditation, dividing up the texts, cutting them into squares, pasting them in the notebook. Then there’s the focus you need to find the words and phrases that you can use, that go together to make new meaning. Finally, you’re looking to build a poem out of these phrases. It takes concentration. You’re making something new. It’s better to be doing than not doing. You’ll probably decide it’s rubbish in the end, but then there’s a phrase lodged in your brain that wasn’t there before. You’re going to use it to write a better poem, aren’t you? And in case you’re wondering what I got out of the page I’ve shared above, here’s the poem. Pelt it with eggs if you like. It’s very resilient!
Testing Sophocles
poor everyone
sometimes you’re it
gentle iron nutrients no skill involved
sometimes you’re flesh
teeth damned in the pond
crawling down houses at night
joys propelled like the ornithologist’s
impossible strategies
for mental involvement
free some blue a kooky older Londoner
kind of allegory
the distillation of the rigorous touch
nothing has any power
that line break
the hard earned cash of failure
double gold petri-dish sun
the concept of luck
scratchcards take precedence over language
This is interesting! I like word playing and being open to play. Sometimes poetry happens in the connections your brain makes, sometimes. At my Stanza group on Saturday, we took a first line from a poem published in the current Poetry Review then wrote in response to it and passed the poems round – Exquisite Corpse poems. You have to force yourself to be quick and to not think but to write. Thanks for sharing this. I might try it!
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Glad you found this of interest Josephine. Ideally, I’d like to give it another go with a less random choice of texts, just to see what it generates. If you do try this method, I’d love to read the results.
All the best,
Julie
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Thanks so much for taking an interest in what I’m doing. I really admire the reach of your blog. Inspirational!
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Hi Julie,
I’m very interested in collage processes and frequently use them in my writing. I hadn’t come across ‘’cubomania’ before. I think I might share some pages of my notebooks on my own blog. Have you come across the site http://www.languageisavirus.com. I use the ‘cut-up’ engine/s quite a bit – something fresh and interesting always comes up. Thanks for an interesting post.
Pam
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Thanks for the Language is a Virus link – looks great. I will certainly be giving the cut-up a try.
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